Reviews for Innocence Undone

The average rating for Innocence Undone based on 2 reviews is 2.5 stars.

Review # 1 was written on 2013-12-06 00:00:00 Hannah E Kilburn I've never read this book but it was checked out on my library card a few years ago. I was confused when I'd been told I could not check anything out because of an overdue book. "What book?" I innocently inquired. "INNOCENCE UNDONE!!" "I've never heard of that book. There must be some sort of mistake", I spluttered. "INNOCENCE UNDONE!!!!!!!" I became red and flustered and tried to reason with the librarian but she wasn't having it. "INNOCENCE UNDONE!!!" the librarian hollared over a megaphone. The entire library turned to stare at me. This was worse than the time I failed to return "Sweet November" at Blockbuster. I wasn't able to check anything out. I relayed the story to my older sister who tilted her head down and evilly grinned. She had checked that book out under my card.

Review # 2 was written on 2012-01-12 00:00:00 Gayla Mcord This book could have been so much better if written properly. 1. Story has too many cliches. 2. Repetitive use of same phrases over and over again. Like, the heroine is always on the verge of crying at every possible situation ("tears sprang into her eyes", "tears burned the backs of her eyes", "tears rolled down her cheeks"!)..."aching tenderness inside her heart".."tightening of heart"..."squeezing of heart"... 3. Undeveloped and depth-less character. The author wrote in a very simple straightforward manner. There is no proper description of thoughts,feelings,tumults,conflicts that goes inside the characters mind. 4. Second half turns out to be too melodramatic; mature characters start acting immaturely; too stereotypical. 5. The writer tried to include everything in one book. Recommend to young new HR readers.