Reviews for Ryan's Revenge

The average rating for Ryan's Revenge based on 2 reviews is 2.5 stars.

Review # 1 was written on 2014-10-22 00:00:00 Danny Sittler Heroine leaves hero two years previously, hero tracks her down to find out why. I liked the hero and wonderful New York City and London settings.

Review # 2 was written on 2014-11-26 00:00:00 Vincent Ho I wanted to like this one, it's the first I've read from this author, but somehow I couldn't connect to the hero Ryan or the heroine. The emotions were all surface to me. I do like a hero pursuing his love, and I liked the glimpses of his feelings for heroine, but really didn't like 1) heroine using a perfectly nice man who has helped her out a lot, and stringing him along, and hero humiliating the same man, 2) hero putting so much emphasis on heroine being "his own lollipop" (that he doesn't want to share) and not being with any other men for their 2.5 years apart, with repeated questioning about her celibacy, and did her tell her that he wasn't with anyone else because he really loves her? I don't recall seeing that...please someone point out the lines I missed...it was very jarring to me especially after he questions her faithfulness repeatedly, and 3) Ryan decides at the end to be all indignant that heroine believed his ex sister-in-law about their ongoing affair, BUT he had a prior sexual relationship with his brother's wife that he neglected to tell heroine about???? You bring her into your family and subject her to your former lover (one you know is still after you) and don't arm her with the knowledge that you've had an affair with your brother's wife, but are shocked that she believes the former lover? Just not cool. Reminded me of the hero's lie in The Italian's Revenge. I will try this author again...I think if author wasn't trying so hard to create a formulaic HP, the dialogue and plot would flow more freely and realistically...