Revealing Story of Underwear Book

Dear Katie Daynes,
It is a bit boring you need to add a little interest into the revealing story of underwear. I don't mean to be rude or anything but the tittle sounds disgusting and you need to make it interesting[ eye catching]. For instance, I saw Cleopatra and I thought it was the best book ever, so you need to really think about it. I'm giving you this advise so you should take it because I'm very busy with homework and stuff. I don't have time to give you advise but I choose to do it because I like a few of your books and this is just my opinion to make your books even better than they were before. I've been giving an assignment to do an imaginary interview with your favourite author so I chose you. I really need you to help me out and answer a few questions where ever you are Katie. Please reply immediately so we can start the interview.
your dear fan,
Michelle D.